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You Were The First

by James Zealy

We were young
Infants at loving
Innocent of Intimacy

You were the first
You are the last
It seems part of the plan

I was your first
I am your last
Its defined in the plan

We were broken
We were lonely
We found love and laughter

Warriors at life
We fought, lost and won
Survived our family lunacy

Our outline was written
Played as our first song
Back in 1975

You were the first
You are the last
Its part of the plan

01/10/2008

Author's Note: Souvenirs by Dan Fogelberg was the first music I ever bought for my wife of 32 years. We have had a soft place in our heart for his music ever since. We never plan for what life gives us, sometimes survival is the challenge. We have survived the worst, and somehow that unplanned Mantra "Part of The Plan" seems to define what we have been through. God bless you Where ever you are Mr Fogelberg.

Posted on 01/10/2008
Copyright © 2024 James Zealy

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/10/08 at 03:34 PM

Survival is the challenge? Indeed. Well said, and I think that sentiment comes across very well in the poem.

Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/10/08 at 04:14 PM

Seven stanzas with so much sentiment and impact... that I'm sure you could write pages to cover the 32 years+; but what you've posted here is beautiful! ~N

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