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Anywhere

by David Garner



Anywhere
that she may go
is nowhere I'll be going.

Uninvite
me tonight
to the party that you're throwing.

01/07/2008

Posted on 01/07/2008
Copyright © 2024 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/08/08 at 05:05 PM

Mmmm... like a song... you must have a tune to this... or maybe it's just wryly spoken to a friend. Succinct, embodying a sense of finality. The impact grows, one can't tell where the poem will go from the title or the first two lines. Only the third gives it away, and the rest follows.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/09/08 at 10:33 PM

Very playful.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/11/08 at 04:48 AM

LOL! i soooo know this one.

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