1st January 2008 (ku-form)
by Paganini Jones
new day, new start
what's for breakfast?
And so the diet begins! The answer by the way is 'porrage' (or what I believe some call 'oatmeal')
Posted on 01/01/2008
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|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/01/08 at 05:15 PM|
...paganini, what a delightful ku ... don't mind me if i went existential on your, right past athor's note... that last line...trainling the first glorious two, was stupendous...and i went with the explosion of the first two lines and then (with a symphonic cresendo[KA-BOOM!]) bringing one back down to the daily, staid as it may be, full of ennui, sorta uhh regular...that's makes the package of your ku it is soooo real with the "pedestrian-ness" of life i could just sqeeze it...good write, peace, chaz
|Posted by A. Paige White on 01/02/08 at 06:37 PM|
LOL! Well, does waiting til around 1:00 pm to eat the traditional New Year's day fare count? Salt meat, black eyed peas and cabbage? I'm guessing the salt pork blows the whole theory to bits...