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the young cause shivers

by Charlie Morgan

his bent back was strained
as though holding up the sky.
he wrestled with each twitch,
grumbled a year's worth of words
in every look, every neck-turn.

soon, he knew he'd gather no more;
and sadly, he'd be without a title,
a body, too soon without a memory.
as in the road ahead he saw Youth
in its long, laughing strides.

he had visions so vodka-clear
in his hey-day and now, a blur.
as his uvea became dry shellac
and stained all his future years
with a golden, honeydewed jacket.

12/30/2007

Posted on 12/30/2007
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/30/07 at 11:24 PM

I can't decide if seeing everything with a "golden, honeydewed jacket" is a bad thing or not. Maybe we can only escape these shadows by walking above then, to the mountain top by faith...and that takes time, and life's wisdom. Thanks Chazman.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/30/07 at 11:51 PM

Chaz, it's clear who this poem is about, cleverly hidden in between the lines. It wasn't until I reached the end that I realized it. Then, I let out a bit of a sarcastic laugh. The tide might well turn...
~Chelle~

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