by P.T. Brooks

Your voice it paints a picture

Of your hand holding mine

The picture tells a story

Of once upon a time

The story holds a happy ending

Ever after in your arms

So write with me

As i dare to be

The narrator of the stars

Perfection isnt far

Be it held by few

The recipe is simple

only me and you


Posted on 12/24/2007
Copyright © 2023 P.T. Brooks

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/24/07 at 06:03 PM

A poem that shall melt any girls heart. Stash it away for a rainy relationship day!!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/24/07 at 08:31 PM

Exceptionally well done!!!

Posted by Mike Loftis on 12/25/07 at 03:58 PM

Very nice P.T. The flow is excellent.

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