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Senryu: Gold halfmoon

by A. Paige White

gold halfmoon launches
feathered flight from the bay
she snails a rat

12/24/2007

Author's Note: Sorry Kathy, I really tried to do a serious one (It is a very inspiring haiku!) but I'm warped. Though truly inspired by your artwork!

Posted on 12/24/2007
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/24/07 at 06:06 PM

Now that is a dilly, "she snails a rat", I think you have a silly side today Paige but I like it anyway!

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/26/07 at 06:34 PM

haha poor little rat, and new born too--being "sailed" off at first moon viewing!!

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