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Rat's Feet

rat's feet heard running

beneath the storage shed floor

wood stove keeps us warm

12/24/2007

Author's Note: For Mitch (my old Army buddy) and his Japanese wife, Yoko, in the "year of the rat".

Posted on 12/24/2007
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/24/07 at 04:28 PM

Perfect!! That's a wonderful one!

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/24/07 at 04:37 PM

I've got to agree with Kathy. You nailed it!

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