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Saturday In The Park With Danielle

by Terry Olynik

I shared my Snickers, my Canada Dry, and four cigarettes.
You shared your inner-most thoughts and feelings.


What a gyp.

12/22/2007

Posted on 12/23/2007
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/23/07 at 05:01 AM

Oh my, I can't stop laughing. Sorry, but I love the irony.
~Chelle~

Posted by Brian Francis on 12/23/07 at 02:16 PM

LOL I have been there. Great slice of life piece. --nf

Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/23/07 at 03:53 PM

Very thought provoking.... an excellent write that brought a smile to my face...

Posted by JD Clay on 01/05/08 at 06:17 AM

HAHAHAHAHAA! That is too funny to handle in one dose. HAHAHAA! You struck a nerve, I'm gonna need a transfusion.

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