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rainy
by Mary Frances Spencertrickle down
rolling crystal snails
glide beaded trails
along the glass
window
i write inside out
splattering constant
showers into widening
puddles
i shake
furry words flying
cant get the tears
to stop
so tonight
this idea
wet and cold
pours out
like dark water
and joins
the sea
of salty dreams
12/18/2007 Author's Note: Just letting the rain be my muse tonight! MFS
Posted on 12/19/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/19/07 at 09:03 AM Beautiful image of "crystal snails" and "beaded trails". Also love the "widening puddles" tonight! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/19/07 at 12:45 PM Love the imagery and see you as the rain and the tears we all feel in life. Excellent as always. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/19/07 at 02:02 PM I am such a fan of your poetry MFS! You know just how to create the most vivid images in a succinct form. I mean "rolling crystal snails" is a great visual. I am going to add this to my favorites. |
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