WORDS WHIRL by George Hoernerwords whirl whispering
through my mind
leaving me to wonder which
ones will sway you
what sequence - what comparison
will strike you still
and fill you
a lost art this means
of communication
the ancient art of sensitivity
where words were unnecessary
where a wind or willow or
whispering rain were sufficient
when where what why
will my words weigh
in your mind
or is the way a look
an obvious longing
eyes burning
deep into your soul
or sighs searching out your depths
a glance that tears away façade
and goes to the
heart and says yes
wondering hesitant yet
determined to see
hoping expectant
eyes set above a sometimes
simple smile saying
do you see what i
am saying with my eyes
do you know what i am
seeing with my eyes
or does a look
even longing say it
or will a touch it
the truth tender
delicate tentative
yet sure of purpose
testing for response
a hand brushing hand
sensitivity searching
for the nerves
simply
walking side by side
together touching
a hand pressed
lip to lip
warmth
a fullness found
a strength felt
O lost language
are you half found
can we call you forth to communicate
12/04/2004
Author's Note: Previously published on pathetic.
Posted on 12/18/2007 Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/18/07 at 04:02 AM Glad you brought it back this way. Good stuff. |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/21/07 at 08:57 PM god, i know this feeling. |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/21/07 at 09:33 PM A beautiful "whirl" into the "lost art of sensitivity" --I love all the possibilities of wordless speech. And it's a "yes" poem too! I love this part especially "when where what why/
will..." Yes. |
Posted by Shirin Swift on 08/22/08 at 07:37 AM i love the opening stanza, yes, it certainly swayed me, my lips into a smile! great poem. |
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