Love the sorbet image!... "lemon moon" is visual and suggestive both. Sounds like a flavor! Anf the "zesty" mix--of night and after thoughts... a lovely dessert!
...mFs...m'lady i'm riding shotgun on that e'en drive, you got my heart with 'clear drops of hope'...what a delicious perspective you draw in the whole piece, love alllll elements (including you the observer) a delightful piece, mary frances, touche! peace, chaz