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pain

by Bryan Poole

it hurts
the things you do to me
the things you say
the games you play
witholding from me
my thing most precious
i sit here and cry
no harder can i try
to ease my pain

11/25/2007

Posted on 12/13/2007
Copyright © 2025 Bryan Poole

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/13/07 at 03:21 PM

I like the way this moves. Nicely done.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/05/11 at 02:25 PM

Some days this poem could be my mantra. The way you've not cluttered it, simply genuinely stated it - stays with me.

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