| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/12/07 at 04:03 AM Whew!! This is an exquisite look at how words can make us feel so much! Wow Maria!! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 12/13/07 at 01:00 AM Yes, consummate and mouth-watering poetic massage - what especially intrigues me here is the title in relation to the first stanza's "...she says", a delicate manipulation intimating demeanour (perhaps :) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/13/07 at 04:44 PM I would love to hear of the inspiration for this..... |
| Posted by JD Clay on 12/15/07 at 05:37 PM I’ll bet it’s really, really warm in there. How nice of you to let some out. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/16/07 at 08:08 PM WOW! I'm glad I turned off the heater. This is sizzling. You use such strong and descriptive words. As ever, beautiful.
~Chelle~ |
