| Posted by Julie Adams on 12/07/07 at 03:19 PM fabulous! I love the rain (I even love tea) and this is a fine poetic tribute--even the title is great!...loved: "crooked gutters choking" AND "dark dripping/ mind rolling puddles down/ the street" AND "i swirl/ midnight angst/ in tea"...this poem is very strong overall: concise and playful words, illustrative and creative imagery where employed...last stanza felt more abstract than the other stanzas, but a favorite of mine nonetheless...just one person's interpretation, hope not too forward...peace, *jewels* |
