Home   Home

I Am Still Remiss

by Joe Cramer

There is a picture of you that I viewed,

Though I must say I am always remiss.

My heart, forever lost, now is construed

With the notion, the ideal, the premise

In getting to know everything of you.

I wonder about your walk, how you move,

Now I just don't know what I am to do.

My brain is out of sorts, out of the groove,

Though my heart forever remains the same.

I want to tell you of promise to be,

Could you ever hold my feelings to blame?

Can you now view my heart as I now see,

All before me, picture of loveliness.

This picture I see, I am still remiss.

12/06/2007

Author's Note: .... why I love art... and artists.....

Posted on 12/06/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/06/07 at 11:28 PM

I love "getting to know everything of you" and the elegant, mysterious "remiss". Alluring, and extraordinary.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)