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Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/05/07 at 09:48 AM A night swim sounds perfect right about now. There is a place I like to go in Oregon in the high desert, a native-american owned resort that fills a pool with hot springs water. Though I haven't yet been, I hear the most amazing experience is going on a winter night, when the water is hot and the snow is falling... |
Posted by David Garner on 12/05/07 at 03:31 PM your night swim strokes are beautifully timed exercises. I lap each couplet up and must remember to breathe... |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/05/07 at 08:01 PM I think maybe you must be part Mermaid.....your secret aquatic life, always makes for swimmingly good poetry! Thanks. |
Posted by Tom Goss on 12/05/07 at 08:48 PM Laced with lovely images and what a dazzling finale! |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 12/06/07 at 01:10 AM I think Greg is on the wave length about you. ;)
And I dive in with a splashing agreement.
Love, Harvey |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/08/07 at 08:20 AM This is a real delight with each read. Beautiful and a phantasm of poetic imagery and grace! |