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AEIOU and sometimes Y

by David Garner

At the beginning, you
Examined me like medical.
I thought,
Okay, this is kind of
Unsensual at best

and sometimes

Youthful.

12/03/2007

Posted on 12/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/03/07 at 11:47 PM

This is so much fun I can't stop playing with it. The me(edical) and You(thful) wordplay and the unusual "Unsensual" (suggesting nonsensical?) meanings call for serious childplay and vow(el)s of friendship... giggle... am I going too far? Bright and intelligent.

Posted by Cristy M. on 12/05/07 at 02:25 AM

yes. yes, indeed.

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