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blue

by Mary Frances Spencer

do you
know
the way

sky
endless
turquoise
we find
flight
in currentÂ’s
flow

water
glaciers melt
down
oceans deep
life
evolving

music
passionate
angst releasing
hearts alive
are you

all of the stories
pouring
sad
into the
cool

tears must be
my favorite color

blue

12/01/2007

Author's Note: Sometimes we all feel this... MFS

Posted on 12/02/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/03/07 at 12:04 PM

Wonderfully accomplished.....

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/04/07 at 09:15 AM

I'll have a Blue Christmas and I'll never see blue the same again! Beautiful Blue read!

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/05/07 at 06:10 AM

sweet sad deep all at once...I love the "pouring" the "relaeasing" the "melt" the "flow" the all important "tears" and the "blue"... beauifully resonant, like a waterfall!

Posted by Melissa Panther on 09/25/08 at 10:08 PM

Perfect, rhythmic, memorable!

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