| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/02/07 at 05:51 PM Strong, cohesive, intelligent statement, the imagery you've used and the repetition of "sign" is very effective. "Stood in the line" is one example of how concise and strong the poem is, giving it an actual "waiting" feeling and progression and "salvation the cost" links up there too, in a wry way. This has sense of sculpted, well crafted verse, really intent, and the result of thought out experience, some of the reasons I like it so much! |
