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down

by Mary Frances Spencer

seven poets
going down
digesting
words

in the elevator
time
florescent
but we see
only
the next verse

bling
doors open

minds are out
of the
building

11/29/2007

Author's Note: This one's for Don! MFS

Posted on 11/30/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/30/07 at 02:31 PM

This put a smile on my face. I love short and sweet!

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 11/30/07 at 03:49 PM

Time florescent made me smile but the bling made me show my teeth. Great write

Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/30/07 at 05:08 PM

I love the succinctness .....

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/01/07 at 03:46 AM

giggle it's like an ex-rayed elevator... or an alimentary canal --poets going down! I love that wide open door at the end!

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