down by Mary Frances Spencerseven poets
going down
digesting
words
in the elevator
time
florescent
but we see
only
the next verse
bling
doors open
minds are out
of the
building
11/29/2007 Author's Note: This one's for Don! MFS
Posted on 11/30/2007 Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/30/07 at 02:31 PM This put a smile on my face. I love short and sweet! |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 11/30/07 at 03:49 PM Time florescent made me smile but the bling made me show my teeth. Great write |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/30/07 at 05:08 PM I love the succinctness ..... |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/01/07 at 03:46 AM giggle it's like an ex-rayed elevator... or an alimentary canal --poets going down! I love that wide open door at the end! |
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