Outstanding! I enjoyed the succinctness... too much more could easily turn into a diatribe... perhaps in a later poem... outstanding choices in words and flow!!!

Really nicely written! This needs be read by a lot of people just as it is. Well done.

You've touched on a phenomenon that I've been thinking alot about lately, how we have so much technology at our disposal, and how information is nearly instantly available, and yet we're still able to adulterate what really goes on.

really nice work here. so many great images. haunting.