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Missing-Haiku
by Charles M Harrisonon swift feet we pass
solid wall of small faces
innocent eyes glare
11/26/2007 Posted on 11/27/2007
Copyright © 2024 Charles M Harrison
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/27/07 at 05:11 AM Very nice. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/27/07 at 04:11 PM The title you chose for this definitely adds a missing dimension to it. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 11/30/07 at 03:34 AM Reading through this one, stirs up emotions of sadness and rage....aloha..;-0 |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 12/01/07 at 05:00 PM Well said! Each time I read it seemed to offer a new image of its meaning. Nice work. --bf |
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