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surf this
by Mary Frances Spencerit must be
a surge
energy
waves
that roll with
primordial tide
i tumble
salt
sand
sky
cracking
away
old shell
i
surf
this body
on intention
rolling dreams
spiraling through
fear
fate
falling
crashing
against
an
unknown
shore
11/20/2007 Author's Note: Deep breath ahead! MFS
Posted on 11/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/21/07 at 03:24 AM Nothing wrong with that. Heh. Good stuff. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/21/07 at 05:58 PM This must have to do either with your writing or some decision in your life. I can sense the buildup of feeling and tension as the words "roll" to the end. And yes...breathe...
~Chelle~ |
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