Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 11/17/07 at 04:26 AM I like the sensual imagery of this - actually I have been browsing your newly-built library and I like your use of language and imagery, and even though I'm not generally a fan of "centered" poetry, with yours it actually seems to work, especially the "object" poems like this one - suggests a "concrete" structure - well-done! d:-) |