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You were the place I found me

by Samantha Shaw

Your eyes take me to a place of clarity
a placid lake that flows to eternity
a shade of blue so serene I would dip a finger in to taste its beauty.
I dont know the depths of your soul
but you take me in with each passing moment
my thoughts disolve on my tongue
I search for those words
and find where you have settled.
My world is now a dream
with You my reality
at this moment I want nothing more
than to bask in your dawns light
to sleep under your blanket of stars.

04/25/2005

Posted on 11/13/2007
Copyright © 2024 Samantha Shaw

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 11/13/07 at 10:26 PM

"my thoughts disolve on my tongue I search for those words and find where you have settled." are my favorite lines. Welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Gira Bryant on 11/14/07 at 08:05 AM

Welcome to pathetic, Samantha. :)

Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 11/15/07 at 05:27 PM

I agree with paige, that line is a killer :) Lovin' it. Welcome to our world :D (muahaha)

Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/19/07 at 10:47 AM

Outstanding! Welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 03/01/10 at 12:50 AM

Simply the most beautiful-beautiful POTD... Congratulations!

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