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drowning

by David Garner

i
feel
like
i
am
drowning
looking
at
the
white
lint
on
the
burgundy
carpet
at
1:23
a.m.

11/09/2007

Posted on 11/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/09/07 at 07:46 PM

wow... there is something here that made me want to cry right away. I think... it is ... the delicate brink that is expressed... the fragile bridge crossed, the jump from looking to feeling, the swell of life that is always there... even in the most ordinary... and those specks that happen to be before us at the time... lodge into memory... sigh

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