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Early
by David Garnerearly
in this
earliness
you make yourself so comfortable
in my apartment
I love to hear
you brewing tea
for me
while I am
sick in bed
you know exactly where things are
I can tell by the perfect number of times
you open and close the kitchen cabinets
11/08/2007 Author's Note: Thanks, Barbara. You're right. I took the last line out.
Posted on 11/08/2007
Copyright © 2024 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/08/07 at 08:41 PM ooooh I love this. I love "early in this earliness"! (Just as you might expect me to...) I get chills of pleasure reading this. There is "exactly" the right amount of information and subtle feeling here, to achieve this. A favorite. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 11/08/07 at 10:45 PM sweet |
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