| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/08/07 at 03:27 PM This strikes with such strength and determination. I could use a slice right now. :-) |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/08/07 at 04:47 PM Inspiring and direct! I like this very much...adding to my favorites.
Mary Frances Spencer |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/08/07 at 05:47 PM ...hey ahh, genevieve, mmmm i believe you, i believe you...a lovely lil' lilt o' life from the perspective of the lonely[truthful]life, anahaha, i do like the recurrence of "promise"...great introspective device...scary to us mortals, eh?...good write m'lady...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/08/07 at 06:53 PM i love sincerity, honesty, the way all is embraced without regrets or backward glances...and the strength of your words ... *m.a |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/13/07 at 10:18 PM Honesty is not an easy road and to be honest with oneself even harder but you seem to have taken the introspective journey and come out of it with clarity and veracity. Bravo. smh |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 11/14/07 at 10:00 PM I love how coloquial and simply stated this is, the layout really adds to that feel...a poignant topic, delicately handled...well done, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/15/07 at 01:21 AM Oh how completely refrreshing to hear this and to know it completely. Perfectly expressed, honesty is better than any gift on this earth. I love this poem. —Jill |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/09/09 at 08:01 PM With honesty and sincerity, there can be no regret. I love your attitude of "what you see is what you get" Thanks for this very honest write! |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 12/14/15 at 02:26 AM No mistaking anything here. Clear and to the point. And so nicely done! |
