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his hands would feel everything

by Ava Blu

his eyes puffy,
she knew he needed her touch

afraid of his tongue,
he withdrew for the night

she would never forsake his trust,
continuing to believe in the things he wants

place without a home,
life within a box,
he can find the buried treasures

she would be there now,
if the winds weren't so harsh

making her way around the room
with his eyes locking on her figure,
time would stand still

he hopes she is falling in love,
and she hopes he already is.

11/07/2007

Posted on 11/07/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/10/07 at 05:41 PM

Man, I wish someone would write poetry like this about me.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/10/07 at 08:28 PM

wow--yes, wonderful. gives me chills those winds...and the "time" standing still. with words like this... he must already be...

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 11/12/07 at 03:02 AM

harsh winds and tears of dust washing the facial expressions of ambitious soulful strive to see you long enough to not touch or it all falls away. lovely.

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