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Million Stars, Repost (With an alternate ending).

by Rhonda Maneki







I fell like million stars from the

sky to be caught within

your hands.



My essence, shimmers of

moonlight silver, dripping in mirrored

pools at your feet, your

eyes reflected in me.



You say, I'm beautiful for I'm a million stars,

and yet you really see me.
























10/24/2007

Author's Note: I wish to extend a million stars of thanks to Kathleen Wilson for her suggestion of an alternate ending " yet, you really see me". I reread this several times with and without it the alternate ending. I like this ending much better, thank you again Kathleen.

Posted on 10/24/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alisa Js on 10/25/07 at 04:16 AM

Well, Rhonda... I think both versions are lovely.. just like you.. (((hugs))) from over here on this side of the island paradise..lol..;-)

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