| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/24/07 at 01:42 PM ...maaaaria! you did it again!...as i read this tight piece i read it like a slam-poetry kind of thing...but all slam poetry itsn't about kicking the white man's arse, anymore[in the past couple of years]it's become as expressive as one's love to [a] her...so as i re-read it i paused in between the spaced words and wowwweee, it really walks, melady [take a bow] |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/24/07 at 03:00 PM sigh.... me too. *always your sister... in words and dream.... |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 10/25/07 at 04:29 AM What a wonderful metaphor for romantic love... beautifully expressed... aloha to you and yours from across the world out here in the middle of the deep blue sea underneath a swaying palm....;-0 |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/28/07 at 08:46 PM I feel the whisper of this. It curves like a beautiful sea-horse and makes me feel the gentle ocean tide urging the journey. I feel the embrace of this, the peace of this, the love in this, the sensuous touch of breath's breezes. So much beauty, Maria. |
| Posted by Michael Defries on 01/21/10 at 09:34 AM "Velvetmoist" Soft and serene wording making me melt. Magnifico!!! Bellissimo! Fantastico! ~~~ I Love It! |
