| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gira Bryant on 10/21/07 at 06:50 PM I have been with people who have made me feel like this and damn, it's frustrating. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/22/07 at 06:26 AM Yikes. |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 05/12/09 at 12:47 PM this is brilliant...brilliant...every word. My jaw dropped somewhere in the middle of the first stanza...hit the floor by the end of it and I'm just picking it up now....if that makes any kind of sense. I've been journeying through your posted works here and overall am really enjoying your wit... |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/17/09 at 03:25 PM Oh how I've wanted to have the mox to slap somebody smart. What helps me calm down is finding a poem like this. Especially this to the monster: "living with yourself is punishment enough."
I stand in your corner.
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| Posted by Mo Couts on 08/25/11 at 06:32 AM Wow. This is powerful. I loved every word of it. |
| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 05/31/13 at 10:37 PM Some people confuse evil with their own trivial lusts and perversions, but real evil, true evil, is as pure as innocence. |
