| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 10/21/07 at 02:38 AM heh, I know what you mean. Almost exactly what you mean. Great poem <3 |
| Posted by Gira Bryant on 10/21/07 at 05:16 AM I love this line - "Perfume still stains like blood"... particularly because I think the stain is invisible, but tangible. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/21/07 at 10:36 AM The title drew me in and what followed was more than satisfactory. Great read. Most enjoyable. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/25/07 at 08:57 PM Yes, it does make sense. Sounds like you're entering a new phase of your life and the environment is not as familiar as the old one.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 11/30/07 at 03:26 AM I love the title and the way this flows. Very Nice. |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 08/08/09 at 12:39 PM Ohhh nice indeed. |
| Posted by Gail Wolper on 12/04/12 at 09:02 PM Haha, jsut a bit sinister at the end! I love this one and yes it makes perfect sense. I just wrote a poem and was not sure if it made sense, but upon the reread it was fine. I think the subconscious takes care of one,k if one is already an established poet... |
