|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by George Hoerner on 10/18/07 at 03:39 PM|
Sometimes eye issues give us a different picture of the world both inside and out. Your words develop that picture very well. Nice write.
|Posted by Alisa Js on 10/18/07 at 06:10 PM|
There is a reason for everything in life.. sometimes they are apparent, and at other times, what may initially appear to be a stumbling block turns out to be one of God's biggest blessings. I know as I have experienced this plenty. Aloha to you, my friend across land and sea.. alisa ;-)
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/18/07 at 07:29 PM|
It is good to have you here.....
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/21/07 at 11:22 PM|
Reminds me of the cliche, "When given lemons make lemonade". You've turned a disheartening disability into wonder, seeing beyond the natural, seeing by the mind, by the spirit.
|Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 10/22/07 at 07:43 PM|
feels like a dance in a secret garden with a thousand genius fairies. some of the word meshing and such going on in this poem truly give it a fantasy edge. very whimsical and dreamy.