| Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 10/18/07 at 04:01 AM I think I get it, then again I tend to think outside the box; - by outside the box I mean down in the gutter - nevertheless, I like this piece. Not because I have a soft spot good rhymes, but because it says a lot with few words (I've always envied people who could pull that off). Home is indeed a person whom we may never know: This poem feels very lonely, and I adore it for it... Excellent work. |
