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Vanquished

by Alisa Js

I was brought right to the edge
carried along and almost succumbed
tidal wave of emotions summoned
and ready to release...

then silence
dead silence
for days,
and nights

I waited in vain
someone is playing
and not with my mind

I watched as the scene faded fast
furious exchange
unrelenting,
and I'm back to the edge
dangerously close to the fall
throw in the towel
guess I'm not worthy
why bother?

all my pictures were removed
simply vanished
I can read the writing between,
I've seen this chapter before
no explanation
no calls ...

10/12/2007

Author's Note: This one is about insecurities personified. In any type of relationship, communication is key. Without open dialogue and the continual exchanging of ideas; doubt, worry and insecurities can creep in where there is no reason to or basis for. Every moment is a moment to be cherished. Let us celebrate these moments by creating beautiful memories that will last forever. *sigh*

Posted on 10/12/2007
Copyright © 2026 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/13/07 at 03:24 AM

A worthy struggle, I suppose. Heh. As always, you make the battle that much more interesting.

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