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Once My Hero
by Anita MacYour eyes are sunken,
and I am concerned.
Take a step back;
this is as far as I go.
Flushing confusion
commandeers my face
each time you apologize
by way of a
"Thank you."
Pleading eyes.
I see
sunken pleading eyes,
and I am concerned.
What did I do?
What did you do?
Intention and unintention
between tangent lives,
can it even matter?
You are stunning.
I am lost in
sunken pleading stunning eyes,
and I am
concerned.
10/09/2007 Posted on 10/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/10/07 at 02:52 AM A nice kick in the ass. Very striking, hook-jab-hook-jab kind of stuff. |
| Posted by Ryan Nardi on 03/26/08 at 04:04 PM Great mix of speed and slowing. The repitition works really well for you here. |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 05/01/08 at 10:09 PM haunting and lovely...this will stay with me for a long while... |
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