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Earrings

by Joe Cramer

She left her bronzed earrings on my dresser

Some sort of wire hoop thing with a hook.

I sat them aside momentarily, awaiting the time

When I could call you to take another look.

Instead, you promptly called me and said

That you would not care to ever see me again.

I tossed your cheap, junk jewelry in the trash.

To think, I thought you would at least be a friend.

10/02/2007

Author's Note: my sordid love life...

Posted on 10/02/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/02/07 at 09:02 PM

I really like this. Such simple words but they evoke a feeling of betrayal.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/03/07 at 02:08 AM

Good strong metaphor. The "earring". the call. The listening, the circle of events. A memorable poem, circular and sad, but clear and intelligent.

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