Draw your name in cliff song by Shirin SwiftFlung and wild, white flowers
clung like hailstones or tiny mints of panic
to the overhangs green ribs.
Jeans toughening in the suns detergent
mind, a scrubbed hand-me-down
such as a grandmothers cooking pot.
Trees fall across the view
and seem to decide we need an occasional glimpse, like prisoners,
of the green valley kneeling in its worn dress.
Tears kick their way out like babies like spirits;
the sharp bends arm themselves reload their antique Boer revolvers.
God wrote flowers for the wind, and the distances to evolve us.
10/01/2007 Author's Note: After a scenic drive.
Posted on 10/01/2007 Copyright © 2025 Shirin Swift
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/01/07 at 01:58 AM Wils imagery as befits the drive! Love the clothing images, carried through, and cooking pots, unexpected but seemingly in place. The "tears" can be read both ways. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/02/07 at 12:44 PM Outstanding! |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/29/08 at 08:24 PM this is fantastic, shirin. the language is ridiculously fresh - i love it! |
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