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a pale autumn moon (haiku)

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

a pale autumn moon
shining through the leafless trees
a nocturnal sun

09/30/2007

Posted on 09/30/2007
Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/30/07 at 04:51 PM

I'm not the biggest fan of Haiku but this one grabs me. Excellent

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 10/01/07 at 07:57 PM

i love haikus and am enamored with your style.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/02/07 at 02:59 PM

The second last word is what makes this haiku unusual and stunning, I think!

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/04/07 at 10:13 AM

I can see the gloomy moon shiny like the nocturnal sun through empty branches. Now this is a cool Ku!

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