a pale autumn moon (haiku) by Sigurdur Haraldssona pale autumn moon
shining through the leafless trees
a nocturnal sun 09/30/2007 Posted on 09/30/2007 Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/30/07 at 04:51 PM I'm not the biggest fan of Haiku but this one grabs me. Excellent |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 10/01/07 at 07:57 PM i love haikus and am enamored with your style. |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/02/07 at 02:59 PM The second last word is what makes this haiku unusual and stunning, I think! |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/04/07 at 10:13 AM I can see the gloomy moon shiny like the nocturnal sun through empty branches. Now this is a cool Ku! |
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