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She Gently Weeps
by Tony Whitakerpre-dawn patio
i stroke my love with delight
guitar feels the night
09/24/2007
Author's Note: I love to play my guitar on the patio before the sun comes up. The still night air is acoustically magic. Also, thank you Kathleen for your critique. I do like it better without the caps, and I like the pause caused by the hyphenated pre-dawn.
Posted on 09/24/2007
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 09/24/07 at 01:58 PM This poem has shared the magic. In so few words I could imagine the haunting sounds of guitar tears. Your fingers provoking only to lightly brush away as soon as they surface. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 09/24/07 at 02:29 PM Love the surprise of this-- the guitar, your love. And so responsive too! Love the delicate strokes of this. |
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