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Never Wish On What You Can't touch

by Olivia Weinkein

i shouldn't be feeling like this.
i shouldn't be wishing like this
because shooting stars
never get you that far

contagious as warm skin
a mosquito

somewhere in the dark

and so and so wants to meet you
wants to
get to know you

shooting stars
never get us that far

and don't be ridiculous
don't be weird how

can you be

so strange like that

so

e
a
s
y

easy now it makes no difference to me
and i'm lying and a cat has your tongue
you don't belong you just

don't belong

and i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry
for all of the things right now it seems

i can't put a finger on

get a handle on this take hold we're all f a d i n g
we're all fading
somewhere between the night meets the day
is where i left you is

where you are

because shooting stars
never get me that far

09/21/2007

Posted on 09/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/21/07 at 07:49 AM

There are many styles of poetry on this site, some I enjoy, some are just too esoteric for my taste, although some have a rhythm and melody that overcomes the nonsensical nickel words strung together to impress(?). Then I come across this style and it is so refreshing. Do you read Bukowski, since this is what I felt when I read it? Pardon my language but damn good poem and into my favorites.

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