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in your absense
by Olivia Weinkeini thought i saw you for what you are
but i am no good at pretending
and it didn't have to mean anything
until it did
now it's everything to me and what a
waste i say what a waste these days
focusing on the hours
and you're still not around.
09/21/2007 Posted on 09/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/21/07 at 07:51 AM Where did you come from? I love the lines:
now it's everything to me and what a
waste i say what a waste these days
Another wonder Olivia...
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| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/21/07 at 10:56 AM I enjoyed the word choice and the imagery provoked... well done! |
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