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in your absense

by Olivia Weinkein

i thought i saw you for what you are
but i am no good at pretending
and it didn't have to mean anything
until it did
now it's everything to me and what a
waste i say what a waste these days
focusing on the hours
and you're still not around.

09/21/2007

Posted on 09/21/2007
Copyright © 2025 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/21/07 at 07:51 AM

Where did you come from? I love the lines:
now it's everything to me and what a
waste i say what a waste these days

Another wonder Olivia...

Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/21/07 at 10:56 AM

I enjoyed the word choice and the imagery provoked... well done!

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