Hi Joe, Good one. Excastly, is right. That's a different way to do a poem. Good question. See how many different answers you get. :)

Good question! You really made me think about all the possibilities. . . where does one begin?

Great question you have posed here. I think it's pretty amazing how we poets and writer types... do tend to write on the same page sometimes... I have written one as well, titled.. Breathless.. perhaps it's the ...'great minds think alike' syndrome?? lol... thanks for sharing.. aloha..;-)

Very well said. I like this. And, I agree it would be a better life to always be breathless.