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So Sweet

by Joe Cramer

She is so very sweet to me

Going through her days.

I wish that I could more often say

How much I miss her.

Someday she will read

Perhaps, the ramblings of my heart,

As I loved her from the beginning

From the very start.

09/19/2007

Posted on 09/19/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 09/19/07 at 03:29 PM

this reminds me of my daughter. thank you.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 09/19/07 at 03:31 PM

Lovely in green... the third line a surprise--as "she" is there...and yet you need to say "I miss her" nice ending with "start"!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/05/09 at 08:50 PM

this is so sweet and beautiful from start to finish- loved this piece! Great job

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