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The safety of the cave

by Keith D Allison

More than a hermit are thee
for there is giddy in the song unsung
stretch forth your wings
let your heart be brave
 
For the breath is out there somewhere
whispers in your name
May the night
give you, your wings
 
Have you heard the breath
the right kind of wrong
the stars of night
will pull you a long

09/17/2007

Posted on 09/17/2007
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/18/07 at 03:04 AM

I like the way you put this together. It's got a really nice, unique style going for it that's extremely well done and very effective.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/20/07 at 07:03 PM

Beautiful... it made me feel as if I were dream walking... unshackled by the cares of daylight

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/20/07 at 09:57 PM

This is light a light in the dark night! Excellent, Keith. Thanks.

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