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september fifteenth, 2007

by Ava Blu

i am made of earth's tears,
her sweat tangled in my hair;

bend to the sun's whim,
i am forgiven of sin.

thou shalt not pretend to be
the one making me laugh;

if you were here,
would you be able to listen?

09/16/2007

Posted on 09/16/2007
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/17/07 at 12:37 AM

the optimist says yes. are you still pessimistic?

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/17/07 at 03:49 AM

Personally, I'd make the effort.

Posted by Richard Paez on 09/20/07 at 02:47 AM

i'll do one better than to make your own my own. instead, i'll just send my love. <3

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