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Jungle Night Haiku

by Tony Whitaker

cool mordant prowler
no wind stirs the jet black night
-panthers slit-eyed light

09/09/2007

Posted on 09/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/10/07 at 03:52 PM

Great haiku--feel the chill, see the gleam of those cat eyes. Happy belated birthday!

Posted by Alisa Js on 09/12/07 at 01:37 AM

interesting one here and most descriptive... stop on by sometime, my friend.. I have missed reading your comments.. aloha

Posted by A. Paige White on 09/12/07 at 06:13 PM

You set the mood, then you gave it eyes to look at us with. Great job! I can just see those cat eyes gleaming out of darkness.

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