i have to admit, this one feels like it's missing a line. just one line. and i'm not sure where it would go or what it should be. i don't know, and i apologize for that. it's still really good, but it's lacking the kind of bite i've come to expect from you on poems like these.

I know this feeling. I could have said these exact words over and over this entire year. Poignant and intense.

Much better.