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september one, 2007

by Ava Blu

why can't i just call him


and why won't he just see
the petals around my feet

09/01/2007

Posted on 09/02/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/02/07 at 01:46 AM

You can call him! Just do it!

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/02/07 at 11:01 AM

maybe he tries to see the petals around your feet. maybe he pulls weeds that you throw in his way to see if he'll keep coming back to groom your hopeful pleasures.

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/02/07 at 11:03 AM

maybe you choke him with your halo of silence.

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